i was recently given a writing prompt, to write a poem inspired by a painting. here's the painting and the poem i wrote:
-(1992) The Singing Butler, Jack Vettriano-
his hand didn’t dare sink lower, fearing a
quick slap to his freshly
shaven cheek, a sting
his heart would not quickly forget.
Lady Crimson’s silk gloves tickled his carefully
manicured hands, and his mind flashed back
to that summer night, when the gloves glided
down, pooling on his cold wooden floor,
and her hands ran through his trimmed hair.
how the red dress that now clung to her curves,
brushing her ankles that were sprinkled with grains
of golden sand,
slid off her shoulders and down her pale arms
the clouds now were growing darker,
yet his forbidden didn’t stop dancing.
the umbrellas were suffering,
losing a battle to the distant gale that
would soon devour them.
still his forbidden didn’t stop dancing.
the waves grew taller, the water
lapped at their knees,
and the rain crashed down, drowning
out the protests of the two spectators
afraid of being caught by their master,
who was running down the beach.
still his lady kept dancing.
and then he was dancing too,
letting go of all etiquette, freeing himself of the anchor
that had kept his love for her
under the rupturing seams of his borrowed suit.
the two danced, into the ocean
and under the waves,
the wind sweeping them away
to dance together for all eternity.
Beautiful poem Pepa, I really enjoyed it!
Best poem so far, Pepa. Really well captured - even without the image of the painting, we would have ¨seen¨ it. Congrats!
Beautiful, both painting and poem.