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some call it redemption

  • Writer: Pepa Peeters
    Pepa Peeters
  • Apr 4, 2021
  • 1 min read

if time must come to an end

yet be an infinity larger than others,

let the voiceless dialogues flood the streets.


have them wash over everything unsaid,

everything forgotten, remembered seconds too late. secrets too comfortable in graves of sand,

seeping into the soil, which tastes of death.


on the streets, outside houses of concrete, a torrent of rage,

a maelstrom of grief,

crashes into millions, drowning out their voices.


then there’s the drip of guilt,

echoing around an empty valley,

ebbing towards the vortex of sorrow,

that swallows the sunlight that once extinguished rainy days.


let there be a queue for nothing.

no more waiting for something that will never come— some call it redemption,

some, the end of everything.


the clocks are all melting. we’ve come too close.

the fires have started

to eat up our soles.



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4 Comments


Elena Garrigues
Elena Garrigues
Apr 05, 2021

Getting better, Pepa! But be careful not to mix too many ideas or you may lose the reader.

Also, look at the titles: the singing butler, wishful thinking, blissful oblivion. Try something more abstract!

You are truly and amazing writer.

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Pepa Peeters
Pepa Peeters
Apr 10, 2021
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Hi Elena! Thank you so much for the constructive feedback, I definitely see what you mean! This helps me to keep getting better, one experiment at a time! 😄💗

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Marta I
Marta I
Apr 04, 2021

Pepa as always amazing piece of work, i’m so proud of you!

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Marta I
Marta I
Apr 04, 2021

WOW

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